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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2011 13:14:06 GMT -5
Romance Novel
He held me firmly but gently just above my elbow and guided me into a room. I had never been there but I knew this was his room. I knew what he was going to do to me, and I knew I was going to let him. The door closed quietly and we were alone.
He approached silently from behind and spoke in a low, reassuring voice close to my ear. "Just relax."
Without warning, he reached down and I felt his strong, calloused hands start at my ankles, gently probing, and caressing upward along my tender calves slowly and steadily. My breath caught in my throat. I knew I should be afraid, but somehow I didn't care. His touch was so experienced, so sure.
When his hands moved under my skirt to my thighs I gave a slight shudder and partly closed my eyes. My pulse was pounding. His knowing fingers continued upward across my abdomen, my ribcage. And then, as he cupped my firm, full breasts in his hands, I inhaled sharply. Probing, searching, knowing what he wanted, his teasing hands quickly moved to my shoulders and slid down my tingling spine. My entire body was throbbing when he discovered my pink, lace thong.
Although I knew nothing about this man, I felt oddly trusting and expectant. "This is a man," I thought. A man used to taking charge. A man not used to taking "No" for an answer. A man who would tell me what he wanted. A man who would look into my soul and say...
"Okay all done. Here's your purse, ma'am. Have a nice flight."
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Post by efco on Jan 13, 2011 13:16:01 GMT -5
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Post by Dallas on Jan 13, 2011 13:19:04 GMT -5
and Later, you were asked to leave.. come back tomorrow...with your wants and not needs.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2011 13:20:20 GMT -5
I think this needs to be moved to the adult forum. seriously though, that was cute.
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Post by Dallas on Jan 13, 2011 13:21:37 GMT -5
She begged for attn: and moaned when he left.
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Post by BeenThere...DoneThat... on Jan 13, 2011 13:24:49 GMT -5
...so, what is good for you?
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Post by DebMD (banned) on Jan 13, 2011 13:25:34 GMT -5
His steely grey eyes penetrated hers. He then turned his back and walked away.
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Post by Dallas on Jan 13, 2011 13:28:46 GMT -5
LOL,penetrated eyes? what romance novel are u reading??lets play Later.. buying you heels now !!!
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Post by DebMD (banned) on Jan 13, 2011 13:32:30 GMT -5
She reached under her seat and slipped on her stillettos.
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Post by Cookies Galore on Jan 13, 2011 15:42:54 GMT -5
Nice except for the genders being wrong. It should be a man-on-man or woman-on-woman story.
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Post by Peace Of Mind on Jan 13, 2011 15:45:54 GMT -5
All I want to know is what state/country and what flight were you taking. Oh! and the agent's name would be helpful.
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Post by Befferz on Jan 13, 2011 15:51:55 GMT -5
Nice except for the genders being wrong. It should be a man-on-man or woman-on-woman story. That reminds me... A couple months ago, I discovered that I can download a free Kindle app for my smartphone, so I did that and then was browsing the free books. (Yes, I'm cheap. ) I found one "chick lit" type that I decided to check out for the heck of it--it was free, after all. But when I got into it, I realized it wasn't chick lit--it was guy on guy, complete with rather graphic descriptions. Not that there's anything wrong with that... But it sure didn't do anything for me!
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Post by Chocolate Lover on Jan 13, 2011 15:52:08 GMT -5
I didn't see anything about anything throbbing or quivering either! It needs a rewrite!
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Post by DebMD (banned) on Jan 13, 2011 15:53:31 GMT -5
Bhawawawa!!!!! Rewrite Rewrite Rewrite Rewrite
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Post by Peace Of Mind on Jan 13, 2011 15:55:17 GMT -5
I read about some throbbing. When her pink, lace thong was touched. Holy Crap! I just figured out who Later is!!
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Post by DebMD (banned) on Jan 13, 2011 15:57:07 GMT -5
She adjusted her thong as she wiggled her foot into her stiletto.
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Post by Chocolate Lover on Jan 13, 2011 15:57:16 GMT -5
I read about some throbbing. When her pink, lace thong was touched. Holy Crap! I just figured out who Later is!! Ok, I see the throbbing, but I thought HE was supposed to throb and SHE was supposed to quiver.
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Post by Chocolate Lover on Jan 13, 2011 15:58:22 GMT -5
She's not that chick that looks cuter with something in her mouth is she?
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Post by Peace Of Mind on Jan 13, 2011 15:59:21 GMT -5
All I know is that she is friends with Dark. And that's all I'm saying.
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Post by Chocolate Lover on Jan 13, 2011 16:00:14 GMT -5
MM?!?!?!?!
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Post by DebMD (banned) on Jan 13, 2011 16:00:26 GMT -5
Well, Later I tried.
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